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[古韵诗] (原创) 七绝 荷塘炎日

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发表于 2017-5-31 16:49:59 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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(原创)                   荷 塘 炎 日
——忆一次炎暑郊游
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炎炎烈日灼人肤,荷睡一池眷梦如;
忽然沙沙声作起,风排阵浪没前伏。

“没前伏”是指(后浪)淹没前浪被伏倒。

二荷伞张淮上珠光
二O一二年八月五日。


【抄录】: 粉红莲的心事

二荷伞/抄文

池边一朵粉红莲花孤影照绿波
淡装素裹婷婷玉立皎洁又婆娑

熏风吹来花苞轻摇幽香轻飘送
心上人儿你可知道它在想什么
啊   请你告诉我
心上人儿你可知道它在想什么

池边一朵粉红莲花开得多寂寞
默默无语满怀心事无人可诉说
花瓣上面不是露珠那是泪珠流
秋日将临花季过后芬芳何处落
啊   有谁能告诉我
秋日将临花季过后芬芳何处落

点评:二荷伞/文     2012年八月五日  这首歌很能够抒发寻嫁女子们中的闺中怨;同样也适用于寻婚男子。“心上人儿”我以为应改唱作“知心人儿”。因为,“心上人儿”这显然是指她未来的心上人,如果是专指向某一人的她的心上人,那就没有必要这么样子的愁苦了。而用“知心人儿”就是说,只要您是知心人儿就能知道这粉红莲花的心思。
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